So I came up with this idea Today

For your plot which I've already shared with you Miya, but I figured I'd better write it down anyway just in case. For the reason that Jane gets sent to earth by the warrior angels is because of her love for Jake because warrior angels aren't supposed to be in love they have to fight, and they can't be tied down to a man haha. There we have it. I was also thinking she could have been sent away because she couldn't love people - but that would kind of defeat the purpose of your story because Jake needs Jane to realize that they were in love before all of that happened...

Names!

Okay Miya what do you think of these names, and tell me which ones you like.

For the Prince: Chenric, Kenwrec (pronounced Kenrick)
For the Bad King: Eadmund, Edmod, or hmm i'm not sure about those names it needs to be more sinister... Like King Bawldur or King Lyos or something King Torrin was my original name then I changed it to King Sorces and I'm not sure what I like :S
For the Good King: Arold, Eral, Herould he needs to have a strong name but it needs to be softer because he's good and just and whatever.
Bad Kingdom: and this place needs to have a creepy name... hmm bad kingdom bad kingdom.. maybe i'll draw a map today and I'll place a pic of it on here or something. it would make more sensical. umm umm umm

When I....

When I get the prologue done for Iris I'll post it on here :D Also I still need suggestions for names. maybe i'll post a poll or something on my site so people can put their input on it.

Also

Apart from Iris oh and the bad kingdom is called Triladoum and the good one is called (which is my baby and I shall start writing once school is over) my friend Hannah wants me to start writing The Tales of Jane and Elizabeth haha which is a story about us in everyday situations haha like high school and such :P haha

much too ponder

Changing storm

Oh Haligee your supposed to be Senna. Taller and older than Jane, and wiser. Senna's a little ditzy, but when in danger she get's right to the point. Jane is stronger than Senna, but is a little to cocky half the time and is oh so impatient. Sometimes Senna has to save her ass. They're best of friends, but can really tickle each others colors. By colors I mean moods. For example, Jane can piss off Senna so much that she'll throw Jane into the wall, not very hard though.

Iris

There are two kingdoms one lead by Iris's father King (Ted)_____ haha and the other one is lead by King (Bob)____ (i have a whole bunch of names somewhere but i'm not sure if those are the ones i want to use XD) Ever since king Bob.. killed the original king of Sporks we'll call it for now... Anyways Bob escapes and starts a new kindom Spoons we'll call it ( man i really need to find those names XD) The widowed queen soon follows her husband in death many months later due to a peculiar accident. Therefore, King Ted takes the throne.

Over the years King Bob has been brooding and drawing forces for his army so he can "claim" his rightful spot to the throne. Of course both kings have married and From King Ted and Queen Elana they had Princess Iris. And King Bob and Queen Portia were unable to have children so King Bob adopted Prince Ionnoyournameyet and he will become king after King Bob dies and so forth. catch my drift? haha

King Bob begins sending forces of troops to capture small villages outlaying the Kingdom of Sporks. Outraged King Ted begins drawing his troops to fight back ensueing the war... This is when Iris is younger.. both Kings meet on the battlefield to try and draw up a truce. King Bob in his evil ways decides to arrange the marriage of Iris and Ionnoyournameyet.. and that is the only way he will accept an end to fighting is if King Ted agrees to the arranged marriage (they'll get married when they're older of course haha) King Ted agrees to it ( although he never intended to follow through with the agreement he only agreed to make the fighting stop) SOoooo after a few years Iris is 17 and is ready to marry according to their customs and such. King Bob calls upon King Ted to fulfill their agreement and Iris overhears this and is disgusted by the thought soo she decides to runaway :D.

Of course once she runs away they send people out to go find her so she'll be trying the whole time to get away from them and such..

Umm I dunno how I'll add this bit but King Ted finds an abondoned baby unicorn that was dying. So King Ted brought it home and gave the unicorn to Iris and she raised it and since the unicorn bonded with her they can communicate with each other by the unicorn touching her horn to Iris's forehead.

So picking back up to where i left off with her running away there had been rumors of white tiger that was supposedly cursed that lived in the forest around the kingdom of Sporks. But Iris was not afraid of any "silly story" so she wandered through the forest with Spectra (unicorns name) she wasn't really sure of where to go and it was getting dark but she sure as heck was not going back to Sporks. It was getting darker and darker and after awhile all she could hear were night bugs and birds and such.. she found a good spot to hid out in a thick grove of closely woven trees and tall grass and she and Spectra lay down to sleep.

And i also know she meets someone named Emmery who happends to be the white tiger who is cursed to be a white tiger by day and a human by night.

haha XD

Miya

I think you should tell it from Jake's point of view it would make more sense. and which character did you base off me XD? haha